Overall, from the results
of my feedback for the first question, which was "Did you think my advert
was good? Why?" The people I asked thought it was good because it all
fitted together well, one person said that they like how some shots are faster
than others. Another person said they liked how it shows a detailed process of
how the milkshake was being made, the same person said they also liked that
there was someone in my advert who tried the milkshake which promotes the
product well and gives the viewers a positive reaction towards the taste.
Another person said that it was framed and edited well and that overall the
advert shows humour to the audience. For the second question, which was
"What feature exceeded the others within my advert?" The first person
I asked said that the music fit with it really well and it makes the advert livelier.
The second person I asked said that it was the way it showed the products being
mixed together as it shows a lot of colour and it makes the product more
appealing to purchase. The third person I asked said that the best feature was
the music because it was mixed really well with the idea of my advert. The
third question I asked which was "What could be improved in my
advert?" The first person that I asked this question to said that to
improve it, there needs to be more close ups of the ingredients that I used.
The second person I asked said that to improve it, there needs to be more close
ups of the milkshake being made and more close ups altogether to promote it
better. They also said that there needs to be more flavours being made to get a
wider audience. The third person I asked this question to said that there needs
to be closer shots of the product mixing together.
